College Paper

so in english i have to choose someone who has affected me in life and write a paper about them and be amazingly descriptive...

so i choose amanda

i will be posting the rough draft shortly after i write it

OMG YAY!~

Hey, speaking of English papers... you remember that one draft you were going to have me edit? [lol, that was due a long time ago now] Well, I had never received it. So did you not send it? If you did, then either you typed my email wrong, or I gave you the wrong email. LOL -SHOT-

lol well its okay i turned it in i will post it on the forums from now on so you can edit it on here :D

kay.

awwwww cute ^____^

Please proof read the white text :D

k thx
typed this in about 5 min so there are probably alot of errors however i wont see them because well thats just how it works so i am sre this entire paper will be shreaded as soon as amanda signs on :P

College Paper wrote:

There are few people in this world that I can honestly say have affected me in some way. I could tell you that my parents affected me in tremendous ways. I could also tell you that my teachers have affected my personality drastically. However I do not believe that any of those things apply to me. There is only one person who has had a profound effect on me and I have only known her for 1 year now. Her name is Amanda.

Amanda is a very narcissistic person and consistently calls herself amazing. Although she has this dominate personality type she can also be full of love and compassion for her friends and family. She is an incredibly creative person and often shows it though her workings in web design and graphic design.

Amanda is a very bizarre person when you first glance at her. She is short and stout. Her cheek bones are very high and she has humongous cheeks. She has short chocolate brown hair which often reminds me of a rich Hershey’s bar of dark chocolate, however since her hair is so thin you can hardly notice this color. Amanda has a piercing through her lower lip which causes her to have a slight lisp when she speaks, but be careful when talking to her this piercing can also cause her to spit uncontrollably when she speaks. Freckles shower over her lower face in a mask like pattern cover from one check to another.

She has influenced me greatly in the past year that I have known her. She has allowed me to realize that self confidence is a mindset not a state. This helped me greatly since before last year I was considered legally depressed. Amanda has also taught me that many great things come in bizarre packages she showed me a point of view I honestly didn’t even think of before I met her. She can brighten up any room just with her hyena style laugh. She can also bring everyone to her aid with a moment’s glance of sadness. I never met anyone like this in my life; everyone was set in stone, clichéd and almost to the point of annoying, regular.

Amanda has brought many great things to my life and she will hopefully continue to brighten the world with her ideas and her shining smile. She will become an amazing graphics designer and a superb person. She has unlimited potential and has begun to shed some of her personality onto me. This will surely be the beginning of a beautiful friendship.

Wait is this for cereal?

so cereal and to get a good grade :D

Quote :

Amanda is a very bizarre person when you first
glance at her. She is short and stout. Her cheek bones are very high
and she has humongous cheeks. She has short chocolate brown hair which
often reminds me of a rich Hershey’s bar of dark chocolate

Ummm, what?

its a descriptive essay

you need to be rediculously descriptive.... thank god i didnt have to go into tastes of amanda


*shivers*

Did they tell you to be ridiculously descriptive? Because that's ridiculous.

yeah pretty much

Like as in badly ridiculous, as in I can't really take this paper seriously ridiculous.

lol what we know and what the professor knows are 2 compltely different universes

Justin wrote:

lol what we know and what the professor knows are 2 compltely different universes

Like ridiculously bad as in you used ridiculous descriptors that make it sound like you're being sarcastic or something. Doesn't sound at all like a serious paper is what I'm trying to say, but if that's the point of the essay, okay then.

lol yeah she said that iif we sed light brown hair as a descriptor she would fail us

Justin wrote:

lol yeah she said that iif we sed light brown hair as a descriptor she would fail us

Well, you can use something other than light brown and still be creative, and not sound like you're sitting next to several thesauruses, but I get the feeling this prof is trying to look for ridiculousness, because like most English teachers, they're all imbeciles.

Well, I'll leave the editing to Amanda, she might like this more than me, but I will say work on the transitions, it feels like I'm reading a telegram right now.
Ex: Opening statement of paragraph STOP Something regarding the opening statement STOP
It just isn't flowing to me right now.

lolo yeah like the first post says 5 min paper :D

Ok, so after deliberation on how to go about showing you my editing, I finally came up with a plan:

I'm going to take this into photoshop, lay it out like a word document, and then I can use my tablet to write on it. lol.

-copy/pastes and goes to photoshop-

EDIT: though, this would have you looking back and forth between my edits and your copy while touching it up. hmm. thats tedious. -rethinks plan-

bah thats fine

That's gotta be one epic way to edit I'd say.

hahaha, yeah. Its a bit excessive, but writing onto a document is so much easier than going through and making the changes, and then writing a whole 'nother thing explaining my changes.

now to get a catchy title for the paper before i turn it in tomorrow
mmm

how about

Narcissism: It isnt all bad

:D

i like that one

*puts on paper*

LOL.

<3

kk papers done

now time for bed i can post the final detailed one after tomorrow